Carcrash

oldepunk delivers a gut punch of the wickedest sort. This is an outstanding piece of writing.

RamJet Poetry

This was inspired by my friend Georgia.  XOXO

carcrash

How can I feel so much pain

yet feel nothing how many times have I been stung

yet never touched by the sting

If forever is a fever if never is never

what good is it to be this fucking clever

I know what I know and write it down to show

but no, I’m a low fellow

I cannot go

that way

what use is useless, clueless

sometimes mostly stupid and tuneless

ostensibly deranged but you knew that

so how can I feel so fucking dead

was it something that was said?

because all I suffer is in my head

but it doesn’t hurt, it’s just the pain in the rain singing my name for another go at the game and it’s such a shame that I cannot feel anything

Because if i could, you would have just broken me…..

So…

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2 thoughts on “Carcrash

  1. I like your style. Kinda raw and to the point in a crazy sorta way.
    Cleaver is to be Intelligent, Proud and Confident. No matter how presented yet respectful. Thanks for Sharing.

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